Thank you
leave this place I'm not hot or cold.
Let those people then ... is not that they had never counted much.
was just a fun routine. Or rather it was fun to a certain point, then everything began to crumble.
Paul. Salvo. Domenico. Fabrizio. Chris. Mario. Simon. Antonio.
One by one they left and everything crumbled.
That place where every day I went smiling and willing to work has become a place to escape only to find a bed to rest. A few hours to themselves, too many hours worrying about everything filasse smooth. Because I wanted
addossare responsibilities that I do not due it, if I had always taken care not only of my own I would never sick like this, coming to cry for no reason and just fall asleep sitting on the bus with fatigue.
It 's true that if I had not set against those responsible, the place would collapse.
"Attention ladies and gentlemen Monday pastry dell'Orangery sink ..." Arnaud to Jason.
I think I love you.
Creed.
I always thought that when my teachers were gone, I'd be gone too.
And I did. Maybe because I have "high" I really adored them too ... but I can not see Bakeries those driven by other people. It would be treason.
(BUT WHY 'pain in the ass STI ABOVE ME IS NOT NEVER silence? NOT' HARD TO UNDERSTAND THAT YOU SHOULD DO 2 NIGHT SILENCE .) And I swear that soon a "Shut up!" does not save him. Fuck with me in the morning at 9 with music blaring and the nights are late with music and chat ... and then ask me why I'm leaving? PEACE.
This is
lilyj and I love her.
I have no idea what relationship you have with html, but I feel very conflicted, because your story is a mixture of bold and not with the "head" totally random ... The worst thing is still a lack of proofreading. The first part I could read it, but it was full of errors, the second one I have just last year, but the one thing you can say, Azkaban is written with the N, not M.
----------------- I have no idea what relationship you have with html, but I feel very conflicted, because your story is a mixture of bold and not with the "Head" completely random ... The worst thing is still a lack of proofreading. The first part I could read it, but it was full of errors, the second one I have just last year, but the one thing you can say, Azkaban is written with the N, not M.
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Still do not know, but I love you! I am convinced that the god of wild sex guide you to the discovery of fic of this caliber, and that the god of the Italian translation correctly will keep you perpetually under his wing ... but how lucky you are? If I
fic translations of similar, but not on HP, can you tell me where to find them? thanks!
And for the record: excellent best translator like you, that 1000 illiterate who write fic ...
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I was about to start reading the when your fic, giving it a rushed, I realized two things: punctuation burst (......, ???????????, !!!!!!!!!! ) and parentheses (author's note seee, right !!!!).
punctuation put it is a mistake (at best, we use three dots ... and three exclamation points! To the question marks that I know he uses one), while scattered broken only comment on the reading and are disruptive.
Well, I lose their appetite.
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Then, before They all had the mother of the future.
right independently to choose the names, but here it is doubtful whether the lady has ever taken an elementary school. And then the father has nothing to say?
Oh well, back to us: please correct the details of the fic, both in the plot "Severus is a small and licantropina prta home ...", both in terms of missing the warning, or AU and OOC. I admit my inability to accept Snape a leading plush bunnies on a grave and thinking things like "small creature nibble "... brrr, disturbing ...
And then, man, you tear off a piece of biting the hand and not make a turn? Boh ...
Well, I agree with Sour on virtually everything.
"One smut a day Takes the doc away"
As a reader I demand fan fiction in correct Italian, and by the authors (and translators) at least one reading and the launch of spell-check, or compliance with the minimum required. I forgive the mistakes, the error repeated indifference to no .
The world is full of beta readers, schiavizzateli!
Just to make things very clear: When in the comments of fic absolutely unreadable, because written in a language that has nothing to do with the Italian and not with the plot, I find things like "but what a beautiful fic! six very good! !!!", so I still itchy hands, and sadly I realize that illiteracy is still a reality.
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Underneath is a beta, but only for English, and only T'Jill , then avoided betaggi to contact me asking, why I will not accept, I have made this mistake once and I will not repeat the horrible experience of arguing with a person because she says the words and phrases are not all translated.
Going back to my Wonder Vulcan: If she proudly waves the flag "Let's Fucking Spock," I waving the "face fucked Kirk and Spock together" in the right and left "We Fuck Anyone with Someone" ...
My aim as a translator, is to make ends Porno! Potter Peninsula: unbridled sex and no molasses (I'll try, but a little 'I always cola). I will try
portarvici of small steps, but I warn you now: very little bothers me, so expect pretty much everything in the future.
If you looked at my translations should already have a vague idea. Readers
warned ...
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On another: the "edit" I was getting out of hand, so I try to give them a slightly more homogeneous structure. And strangely
more ruthless.
I wonder why, over time, I more and more wicked.
And it is because the rampant ignorance?
UTECO (Single, Titanium Against the Horror Edit) divided by subject :
Awards (the horrors of Yaoi vs Slash):
"'Yaoi' is a term known as 'Slash'? Given that indicates couples boyxboy is correct to use it for HP?
better known? Maybe.
correct? No.
If the writer really knew something they should also know that yaoi and shonen-ai are used for each NC17 stories, the other for the most of the PG-13 based on manga and anime, and then only for the Japanese productions. In fact, to want to be really picky, in Europe and America, rather than shonen-ai, it now uses the expression boy's love.
Slash instead is used for the fic based on books, movies and television Western. They will also both terms that refer to stories boyxboy, but the difference is how. The Slash is not on Naruto fic, but yaoi (shonen-ai or, depending on the rating). The fact that the masses ignore the thing is not to say that anyone who claims to know the difference, must adapt to ignorance rampant.
Italian (the horrors grammatically spelling):
is enough, the measure is full.
I'm sick of those who post garbage comments with imploring eyes full of hope but lacking that little bit of maturity to accept criticism.
So from now on most bitter cocks for everyone. Really
: not take it anymore.
I have no intention of pretending not to see.
not complied with the readers? Publish
horrors and pretend to be incensed?
Then you take the blows.
Ah, then I recently made a discovery fantastic!
Did you know that the spelling in Italian is trivial?
I do not, but since the source is authoritative , henceforth shawl total! Write what you like what you like, even in subjects in the classroom, and if the prof. you break the balls to written words and randomly chosen for the missing accents and capitalization, punctuation launched for around like confetti, and the like , you rispondetele "But prof. are trifles !!!".
I put my hand on fire and will remain so shocked in front of a language so well polished that will give you reason.
... But please! If this
what is taught from primary school, there will soon return to the illiterate under 18.
Pathetic.
For the record: 'up' here 'and' here ', the accent is not' . It is a nursery rhyme that teach elementary , so if you have more than six or seven years and not know it, there is crying.
Zoology (Parental horrors and fauna):
, ferrets and weasels are NOT rodents. NOT are neither mice nor in rats. Weasels, ferrets and mice if they eat them.
Why? Why are mustelids, which means that they are carnivores . They have the same kind of teeth of cats, I hope you will agree, are NOT rodents.
, ferrets and weasels are of the same family, stoats, mink, skunk, skunks, weasels, badgers, martens, otters, sables, etc..
Let's lay off of enthusiastic nod to the first idiot that said crap like "Dolphins are fish ', ok?
PS: any reference to existing fic is not just random, we say that the drop in the drop tank has overflowed ...
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Small autobiographical notes (to close with a bit 'of fun)
& bull ; the little creatures bring bad luck.
Yes, cousins of rabbits, puppy version.
If one of those cute balls of fur crosses your path in the center-city, stop immediately and call 118, because there is going to be a tear in the back, or something equally painful. Other than blacks
cats!
Beware of hares!
I just want to tell you this:
You broke my world Made me strong
thank you
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